Admissions officers generally won't dock minor mistakes in punctuation, but grammatical errors always look sloppy. "I think students would be surprised by how many essays we read that have lots of errors.
We're generally not English majors, we're not looking for comma splices, run on sentences, etc.
So if you love to spend your weekends driving four-wheelers or riding horses or making short films on i Movie, write about that because I can assure you that your natural enthusiasm will read a whole lot better than the stale and generic “I love to volunteer” response – unless that is actually what you spend your weekends doing. I ride for the feeling of two individual beings becoming one, so perfectly matched that it’s impossible to tell where rider ends and horse begins.
I ride to feel the staccato beat of hooves against dirt echoed in the rhythm of my own heart.
One of my favorite things about writing is that there is no right or wrong answer. It’s written by one individual and read by another.
An essay isn’t a scantron that you have to correctly bubble in or risk some computer incorrectly grading you. But all too often students, especially in the application process, forget this. If your topic is flawed, cliché, generic, or boring, it doesn’t matter how well crafted your essay is it will be forgotten.When writing, consider the admissions officer who will read your essay.Take this opportunity to expand on your application -- but remember to re-read your essay with the prompt in mind."Make sure that somebody who doesn't know what you're trying to write reads it and that it actually says what you want it to say.Ask yourself what the admissions office wants to know and use the essay to tell that story," Warren advises.Your audience, be it a teacher, an administrator, or an admissions committee, has likely read hundreds if not thousands of student’s admissions essays.This means that you are going to have to do more than throw in a few SAT words to impress them.throw that out the window because it’s nothing but a one way ticket to Snoozeville not only for you but for anyone tasked with reading it.The biggest mistake students make when writing an essay is that they forget who their audience is.While both of these are wonderful extracurricular activities, unless you are truly passionate about either and have specific details to intertwine into your narrative, it’s going to come off dry and predictable. I don’t ride for the workout, although my trembling muscles at the end of a good lesson indicate otherwise.When describing their ideal student, one of the top words used by the Director of Admissions at some of DC’s top private schools is “passionate.” Admissions Committees are not looking for a cookie-cutter student; rather they are looking for a student who genuinely loves something and will share that love with other students. I don’t ride because I have anything to prove, although I’ve proven a lot to myself along the way.